Journal of Applied Language and Discourse Studies

Journal of Applied Language and Discourse Studies

Bridging Cultures or Preserving Foreignness? Domestication and Foreignization Strategies in Coleman Barks and E.H. Whinfield's English Translations of Rumi's Ney-nāmeh

Document Type : Original Article

Author
Department of English, Faculty of Letters and Languages, Arak University, Arak, Iran
Abstract
This study examines the translation strategies employed by Coleman Barks and E.H. Whinfield in rendering the Ney-nāmeh—the opening poem of Rumi's Masnavī—into English. Using Venuti's (1995) framework of domestication and foreignization, this research adopts a qualitative and comparative approach with a critical methodological refinement: while Whinfield translated directly from the Persian source text, Barks worked indirectly through R.A. Nicholson's English prose translations, re-versifying them into free verse. The analysis is conducted across three distinct linguistic levels—lexical, syntactic, and semantic—to capture the nuanced and multi-layered nature of translation strategies. Results indicate that on the macro-structural level (meaning and emotion), Barks predominantly employs domestication to enhance accessibility and emotional resonance, often omitting or altering significant cultural and religious references. However, on the micro-structural level (lexical choices), he occasionally retains Persian terms—a foreignizing move. In contrast, Whinfield shows a greater tendency toward foreignization at the lexical and syntactic levels, preserving linguistic structures and cultural-religious context, though he frequently anglicizes syntax for readability—a domesticating strategy. The findings suggest that Venuti's binary framework may benefit from a more fine-grained, multi-level application, particularly when analyzing poetic texts with dense cultural specificity. These findings contribute to broader discussions in translation studies regarding the translator's role and the ethics of cultural representation
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Articles in Press, Accepted Manuscript
Available Online from 20 July 2026